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Tamir and Tomy

complete the story Tamir the tortoise was sitting on the trunk of a tree which was lying half merged in water. She was deep in her thoughts and failed to notice the approaching danger.
The cruel Tomy cat knew Tamir well. Many a time she had fooled Tomy and escaped. This time Tomy didn't want anything to go wrong.
"No this time she won't escape", Tomy said to himself.
The very next moment he grabbed Tamir with both hands and shouted "Yes. I Got You".
"I won't allow you to escape." said Tomy, "I am not going to take you to my cave. I am going to eat you right now."
"I knew one day you will eat me", said Tamir, "and I think my time is up. You can eat me right now."
"Where should I start first, head or tail?", Tomy was a little confused. To his surprise he found that Tamir had already pulled in his head, tail and legs.
"You cannot fool me like that", said Tomy, "I will swallow you."
"Swallow me!" asked Tamir, "Do you know the prescription to swallow a tortoise?"
"Prescription? What prescription? I never heard of one," said Tomy.
"If someone swallows a tortoise without following the prescription, the tortoise will stay in his stomach for a year, a month and a day!", said Tamir.
"Then give me the prescription", demanded Tomy.
"It is very easy to follow", said Tamir, first drink some water and jump three times shouting DIGEST."
Tomy drank some water from the pond prepared to jump.
He knew that the tortoise cannot escape if kept upside down, so he left Tamir on the trunk upside down.
"One", counted Tomy, jumped up and shouted, "DIGEST".
"Two", counted Tomy, jumped with more strength and shouted more loudly, "DIGEST" "Three".....

What happened next? Was Tamir able to escape this time too from Tomy?

HERE ARE THE STORY ENDINGS FROM OUR VALUABLE VIEWERS.

Anupriya Agrawal

The trunk broke and Tamir flew high diving in the water. Waving Tomy a farewell and saying he must now eat the prescription, as now it will stay in his mind forever Tamir escaped.

ABHISHEK

Tomy and Tamir slipped from the trunk down in the water and further he was not able to swim and got drowned. Thus Tamir was able to escape from Tommy. MORAL: SELF HELP IS BEST HELP

Tulja

Yes the tortoise was able to escape.

nikitha

Tomy jumped the third time and the tree trunk fully fell in the water. Poor Tomy, tried to swim - he hated the cold water. The moment Tamir fell in the water he swam to safety.

Mihir Deshmukh

When Tomy jumped the third time, the tree trunk on which he was jumping broke and both ,Tomy and Tamir fell in the water. This gave Tamir a chance to escape in water while Tomy struggled to swim to the shore. Tamir's life was saved because of his clever thinking.

shekar

With Tomy jumping the log which Tamir kept was bend down into water. With the effect of this Tamir slipped easily into water. From there she escaped safely.

karan pimpale

YES, Tamir escaped because when Tomy started shouting & jumping the third time on log Tamir was flown off the log.

alekhya

When the cat jumped for the third time the trunk on which they were standing got over turned. The tortoise ,being a water animal, swam away onto the land. the But the cat had no choice but to cry for help.

sam

Tomy cat kept Tamir upside down so that she can not escape. But this was in Tamir's favour as the trunk of the tree on which she was sitting was half merged in water. When the cruel Tommy cat was busy following his prescription to eat tortoise, Tamir the tortoise managed to slide down in the water with his back. And yes this time , too, Tamir fooled Tommy!!

FOONG POH YEE

Tomy fell into the river and thus Tamir escaped from him.

Henry Chew Jin Le

"DIGEST". Tomy were very confused now and then Tomy fell in to the river. The river was very deep and so Tomy died. Tamir was very happy and he turned around and went back to the river.

Chooi Wei Jun

Suddenly the trunk which Tomy and Tamir was standing on started sinking into the water. Tomy was afraid of water. He tried to jump to the bank but he tried in vain. So Tomy sank into the water and that was the end of the cat-Tomy.

Moh Hoy Yi

"DIGEST!" shouted Tomy for the last time and jumped. This time he landed on one side of the log, and Tamir, on the opposite side of the log, was flung up in the air. Tomy leapt once more to catch Tamir. But Tamir was too high up. The tortoise then drop into the water. Grabbing his advantage, Tamir swam as quick as lightning away. Tomy lost his head due to his anger and dived into the water after Tamir. But being a cat, Tomy did not know how to swim. So with a loud yelp, Tomy drowned. When Tamir saw this, he shook his head and sighed, then turned around and slowly paddled away in the sunlit water.

Kwa Sin Yee

"DIGEST"! shouted Tomy. When he jumped, one side of the trunk lowered in the water. So, Tomy fell into the water. "Help! Tamir, come and help me, I promise I will not eat you!"shouted Tomy. Tamir didn't care about Tomy and continued her way. Poor Tomy died there.

Beebu95

Tomy jumped too hard and Tamir, the tortoise, managed to escape. But, Tomy knew that he would never give up. One day, Tomy went to look for Tamir. There, Tamir suggested a race. If Tamir wins, Tomy can eat her up. But if Tomy wins, he will have to let her go. The day arrived. Many animals gathered there. At the end, Tomy won. He was so ashamed because he will have to let Tamir go.

Yong chen Ni

Tomy jumped onto the trunk. Do you know how heavy is a cat compare to a small tortise? So the trunk broke into two. Tamir and Tomy both dropped into the water. Tamir was free and comfortable in the water but Tomy was so uncomfortable. Tamir wanted to save him but he did not have any idea. He was so stupid! So, the poor Tomy died in the river. Tamir wanted to forget the sad incident so he left that place. He felt so sorry.

Xin Mun

When Tomy jumped the third time, he fell into the water. Tamir felt sorry for Tomy because Tomy did not know swimming and panicked in the water. Tamir rescued Tomy by using the tree trunk. After being rescued by Tamir ,Tomy was happy and thanked for her help. He promised that he will not fool her again. Finally,they became best friends forever.

pan XX joon

When Tomy shouted "DIGEST" the third time, then Tamir told Tomy that he need to follow the second, third , forth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eight, ninth, tenth, eleventh........until one hundred prescription. The 2nd was Tomy needed to run along the seaside 10 round a day for a week. The 3rd prescription, Tomy needed to drink 15L water in 20 minutes and so on till the 100th prescription. Tomy was very angry after hearing all the prescriptions and wanted to caught Tamir, but Tamir had already jumped into the river and swam away quickly.

Rohan

The third time the trunk broke and Tommy fell in the water and Tamir had a good escape.

Neoh Chia Choon

Tomy fell into the river and Tamir escaped from Tomy.

Yap Kim Cong

Tomy was dead inside the water because there was no oxygen anymore. So the tortoise Tamir escaped.

Neoh Chia Choon

Tomy felt into the river and Tamir escaped.

chong zhuang shen

With Tomy jumping the log which Tamir kept was bend down into water. With the effect of this Tamir slipped easily into water. From there she escaped safely.

123

YES, Tamir escaped because when Tomy started shouting and jumping the third time the log on which Tamir was standing was flown off.

Hollow Man

"DIGEST!" shouted Tomy for the last time and jumped. This time he landed on one side of the log, and Tamir, on the opposite side of the log, was flung up in the air. Tomy leapt once more to catch Tamir. But Tamir was too high up. The tortoise then dropped into the water. Grabbing his advantage, Tamir swam as quick as lightning away. Tomy lost his head due to his anger and dived into the water after Tamir. But being a cat, Tomy did not know how to swim.

XXX

After Tomy shouted "DIGEST" at the third time, then he turned around and looked for Tamir, but it had already jumped into the river. Tomy was very sad because he could not eat Tamir. He got nothing to do then he had to go back to his living place.

Yong Su Guan

They slipped from the trunk and fell into the water and further, Tomy was not able to swim. Thus Tamir was able to escape from Tomy.

sam

Then Tamir ran away and jumped in to the river. Tomy was sad bacause its food had ran away.

Wong Chun Mun

The third time, Tomy died in the water because a crocodile was there waiting to catch it. So, Tamir escaped from tomy.

Chin Cheow Shing

...as he counted, he jumped up using as much strength as he have... "Splash!" the branch broke and both of them fell into the river. "Help! Help!" Tomy shouted, "I can't swim!!" Tamir the tortoise swam to the shore and watch the stupid cat getting himself drowned... "Help me! Please, Tamir... I promise.... I won't eat you after all this... if you just... help... me......", begged Tomy. Tamir sighed. "Okay, okay... I'll help you, but are you sure that you'll not eat me after this happening?" "YES!!!!!!.......... AAAAAAA!!!!!!!......." Tomy Shouted. "Er... What should I do?" Tamir asked herself. "Help!!!!!... blopblopblopblop......" Tomy nearly drowned. "Aha! Got it!!" Tamir just found a wooden stick that was long enough to reach for Tomy to hold. But when she looked back to search for the poor Tomy in the river, he was already gone. Tomy got himself drowned in the river.

XXXRazarXXX

Tomy died and tamir escaped.

chia Wei Ze

When Tomy jumped the third time, he fell into the water. Tamir felt sorry for Tomy because Tomy did not know swimming. Tamir want to rescue Tomy but he did not have any idea. After a few minutes Tomy died. Tamir felt sorry and left the place.

Win

When Tomy turn back to see the Tamir,he knew that Tamir had already swam away. So he was very angry,he wanted go to find out Tamir. When Tomy jumped into the river he forgot that he did't know how to swam so he died.

Chia Shi Hong

When Tomy jumped the third time, he fell into the water. Tamir felt sorry for Tomy because Tomy did not know swimming and panicked in the water. Tamir rescued Tomy by using the tree trunk. After being rescued by Tamir ,Tomy was happy and thanked for her help.Tomy promised Tamir that he will not eat Tamir again. Finally, the two become best friends!

Teh Selina

"Three”, counted Tomy, jumped up with more strength than the second time, he had no time to shout again! The tree trunk dropped into the water and Tamir luckily escaped from Tomy. She swam freely along the river bank. Not longer, she went up to the river bank and rest peacefully. By the time, the poor Tomy didn't know how to swim struggling in the water. He was panicky and tried to go up to the river bank. At the moment, Tamir felt sorry for Tomy and swam back went to see him. She saw Tomy was struggling with his hands. At last, she called her crocodile friend who brought him up to the river bank. Tomy was thankful to Tamir and the crocodile. He promised that he will not fool Tamir again. They became friends happily after.

Ckhan

When Tomy jumped the last time, the log slipped and Tamir fell into the pond. At last, Tamir was saved.

tan koon meng

"DIGEST!" shouted Tomy for the last time and jumped. This time he landed on one side of the log, and Tamir, on the opposite side of the log, was flung up in the air. The 3rd prescription, Tomy needed to drink 15L water in 20 minutes and so on till the 100th prescription. Finally, the two become best friends!

Andrean

DIGEST. But something went wrong, Tamir managed his position and had a good escape. But, Tomy can't overcome his desire to eat Tamir and he jumped down to the pond. "Haha, cat can't swim and you are a foolish cat who didn't realize it" said Tamir. Tomy was drowned in the pond.

Siwa

When Tomy jumped the third time the tree trunk on which he was jumping broke. Both of them fell into the river. That was the time for Tamir to escape from Tomy who wanted to eat him.

cal me ...

Tamir succeeded in escaping from Tomy. Tomy tried to jump into the river to catch Tamir, but it failed. Tamir say :"Bye" to Tomy went while Tamir swam away.

Parun

When Tomy jumped into the water he didn't know how to swimming at all and fell in the river. And Tamir laughed at Tomy.

Leow YF

Tomy stopped jumping and said, "Hey, brother, it just a joke, isn't it?" But, Tamir was gone.

Tan Loon Hoe

Tomy fell into the water and Tamir escaped from Tomy. Tomy felt very sad because it knew it is going to die. In a same time Tamir jumped down into the water with a small little stick. In the end Tomy was safe by Tamir the little one, at last the two became very good friends forever and ever.

Siwa

When Tomy jumped the third time the tree trunk on which he was jumping broke. Both of them fell into the river. That was the time for Tamir to escape from Tomy who want to eat him.

Cha Zheng Feng

Tomy fell into the water. Tomy does not know how to swin and shouted for help. When he was shouting, the water went into his mouth and he felt the water stuck at his neck. Tamir quickly swam and tried to rescue him. Tamir pulled him to the ground and saved his life.

Yik

"Wait!", shouted Tony. "What 'DIGEST' means?" "Now, that is your second prescription.",said Tamir. "Find out the meaning of 'DIGEST'.Quickly finish your prescription!" While Tony was asking the meaning of "DIGEST", Tamir swam away... "I gotta read more books from now on!!!!!" said Tomy angrily.

dylan chew

When tomy jumped the third time, a hungry tiger jumped from the shore and caught tomy. Then he ate tomy up. Then, there left tamir still upsidedown and couldn't get up.

Lebron James

After Tomy shouted "DIGEST" at the third time, then he turned around and looked for Tamir, but it had already jumped into the river. Tamir was free and comfortable in the water but Tomy was so uncomfortable. Tamir wanted to save him but he did not have any idea.Tomy was very angry after hearing all the prescriptions and wanted to caught Tamir, but Tamir had already jumped into the river and swam away quickly.

Lich King

When the third time, tomy died in the river because he don't know how to swim.And Tamir escape from Tomy.But Tamir felt sorry for Tomy.

Chua Khang Hui

Tomy fell into the river and Tamir escaped.

Leong Kah Yuen

When Tomy jumped again, he fell into a lake and was knocked by a big rock. He was eaten by a crocodile.

CHUA khang HUI

As he counted, he jumped up using as much strength as he have... "Splash!" the branch broke and both of them fell into the river. "Help! Help!" Tomy shouted, "I can't swim!!" Tamir the tortoise swam to the shore and watch the stupid cat getting himself drowned... "Help me! Please, Tamir... I promise.... I won't eat you after all this... if you just... help... me....", begged Tomy. Tamir sighed. "Okay, okay... I'll help you, but are you sure that you'll not eat me after this happening?" "YES!... AAAAAAA!..." Tomy Shouted. "Er... What should I do?" Tamir asked herself. "Help!... blopblopblop..." Tomy nearly drowned. "Aha! Got it!!" Tamir just found a wooden stick that was long enough to reach for Tomy to hold. But when she looked back to search for the poor Tomy in the river, he was already gone. Tomy got himself drowned in the river.

Ling _16184089

Unfortunetely,when Tomy jumped at the third time,he fell into the river.Tamir felt sorry for Tomy because Tomy did not know swimming and panicked in the water. Tamir rescued Tomy by using the tree trunk. After being rescued by Tamir ,Tomy was happy and thanked for her help.Tomy promised Tamir that he will not eat Tamir again. Finally, the two become best friends!

liang wen kang

The third time the trunk broke and Tommy fell in the water and Tamir had a good escape.

Lim Soon Lai

Tomy jumped the third time, he fell into the water. Tamir felt sorry for Tomy because Tomy did not know swimming and panicked in the water. Tamir rescued Tomy by using the tree trunk. After being rescued by Tamir ,Tomy was happy and thanked for her help. He promised that he will not fool her again. Finally,they became best friends forever.

Sruthy.T.Nair

Somehow Tamir escaped . And Tomy fell into the water .

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