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complete the story Once there was a temple on top of the Maliamma hill.
Only on full moon day, people from the nearby villages used to visit this temple.
They feared that the god would turn them in to stones if they visit the temple on any other day.
In that temple there lived an old lady.
She kept the temple neat and clean.
People called her Maliamma and treated her with great respect.
The villagers, whenever they came to this temple, would bring a lot of cereals and other items for Maliamma.
Thus Maliamma lived happily on top of the hill.
She was not alone there.
Machu the cat, Michu the mouse and Muchu the crow were there to help her.
Early in the morning Michu the mouse would go to the nearby forest and bring very fresh flowers for Maliamma to do the Pooja.
Muchu the crow would help her clean the temple by picking up dry leaf fallen there.
Machu the cat would bring fish for Maliamma from the nearby stream.
Maliamma would cook the rice and fry the fish. She would eat only after feeding Machu, Michu and Muchu.
Thus they lived happily.
One day Maliamma fell ill.
She became so weak she found it very difficult to get up from the bed.
Machu, Michu and Muchu became very sad and sat near Maliamma.
They knew that there was more than one week left for next full moon day and no villager would come till that day.
The nearby village was about two kilometres away and it would be impossible to make Maliamma walk.
"There is only one way", said Machu the cat.
"What?" Michu and Muchu asked together.
"Bring the village doctor here," said Machu and continued, "Muchu, you fly to his house and somehow bring him here immediately."
"But how will I convey the message? They won't understand my language." said Muchu.
"Use your brain and play some tricks to bring him here," Michu the mouse said.
"Ok," said Muchu and flew towards the village.

Now it is your turn. Think of a plan or a trick to bring the village doctor to the temple to treat the old lady.

HERE ARE THE STORY ENDINGS FROM OUR VALUABLE VIEWERS.

rajitha

Muchu will bring the doctor's stethescope. So the doctor will follow muchu on to the hill and treats Maliamma.

sindhu

If the crow takes away some valuable thing from the doctor's house then the doctor may run behind and when he reaches the lady he would understand the situation and the doctor might cure her.

hanaazeez.

Muchu went to the doctor and showed some actions that maliamma is ill . So the doctor went to maliamma's house and gave some medicine's and she got well again and lived happily forever.

Pooja

It worked and Maliamma felt better. They all lived happily ever after.

SACHIN

After some time Muchu reached the village. It was feeling very tired. It saw a pot in which water was there. Muchu drank it. Then Muchu started searching for the doctor. Muchu found the doctor. Doctor was sitting in front of a shop. When the doctor was going back to the house , Muchu saw that he was wearing a STETHOSCOPE. Muchu got an idea. Soon he flew near the doctor and pulled the stethoscope and flew. The doctor was running behind Muchu. Finally the bird stopped and landed at the temple. Soon the doctor ran to the temple. Then he saw that Malliamma was lying on the bed. The doctor went to Malliamma and asked her what happened. Malliamma told everything to the doctor. The doctor gave her some medicines and soon she became all right. The news spread to the villagers and they were very happy. Malliamma and the doctor was very thankful to the crow.

Hannah

Muchu ran towards the doctor and said QUICK HE'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The doctor ran to the temple and saw the old lady. He treated her and she got a little better but since the doctor wasn't a very good one she ended up dying.

Megha Bhatia

He took a piece of cloth from the old lady's saree. When he reached the house of the doctor, he started cawing and jumping at the door. The doctor's child was looking at the scene. He thought that the crow is injured and calling for help. He called his father who saw the piece of cloth in his mouth. He recognized that it was from the same saree that the old lady used to wear on the day of Puja. Then he looked at the crow again and recognized him as well. But the villagers said to the doctor that it was dangerous to go as the god will be angry at him. But the doctor said that if he will not go then he will be guilty at himself as his first duty is to cure the needy even at the stake of his own life. He went to the temple and cured the old lady. Everyone was amazed at the cleverness of the crow. Since that she started calling him 'clever Muchu' and praised the rat and the cat too. The villagers myth also ended and they started paying regular visits to the temple.

Sonya

Muchu looked around the village and there he saw a holy sage. And he figured out that the sage could talk to animals. So he went to the sage and said "Oh great one,our Malliamma has fallen ill and since she is too sick to walk to the doctor and nobody comes to the temple unless it is a full moon we had to find a way to get the village doctor to the temple. Oh great one please help us." So the sage replied "I possibly cannot get up from my spot but iI will give you special powers so you can talk to the doctor and only the doctor. But tell him that I gave you the powers to talk to him." So then Muchu said "Oh thank you holy sage,thank you." Muchu flew to the doctor's clinic and explained the problem. So he and muchu hurried to the temple. But there was a problem. If you went into the temple before there was a full moon, you would be turned into stone. And Maliamma was in the temple. So Machu,Michu and Muchu prayed to god and asked that just today if the doctor could go into the temple to cure Maliamma. Then they came down to the steps where the doctor was waiting. Later they went up the stairs and the doctor got some medicine and in no time,Maliamma was better. She said to Machu, Michu and Muchu "Thank you so much for helping me. You will be my caretakers forever!" And they always helped Maliamma whenever she needed help.

divya

Muchu went into the doctor's house. There the doctor had one of his favorite birds (a type of crow). Muchu explained the situation and the bird was trained to speak. It told the doctor the information that Muchu gave. Maliamma was cured and was on her full strength again. She thanked her pets and later whenever she got ill she did not worry instead told her pets.

MOHAMED HASHIR A

Muchu the crow soon reached the doctor's house. Muchu, the crow found the black board on the wall. He tred to explained to the doctor by drawing picture. Later the doctor came to know of everything. Suddenly the doctor think if he visit that temple on this day, he would be turned into a stone. So he send the medicines for Maliamma. After getting the medicine, muchu the crow flew to the temple. After few days Maliamma became alright. She regained her health. On a full moon day the doctor visited the hill temple. Michu ,Machu, Muchu and Maliamma thanked the doctor for his treatment.

apeksha tejwani

The crow reaches the village after some time. He goes to the hospital where the doctor was performing an operation. The crow took the medicine from the doctor's surgery plate. The medicene was very rare and it was brought from a foriegn country. The doctor had only one dose so he ran after the crow. The crow reached the temple and then maliamma told the doctor about everything and the doctor treated maliamma and soon she was well. All of them thanked the crow as without his help the doctor would not have reached the temple.

Wong Kee Seng

Muchu looked around the village and there he saw a holy sage. And he figured out that the sage could talk to animals. So he went to the sage and said "Oh great one,our Malliamma has fallen ill and since she is too sick to walk to the doctor and nobody comes to the temple unless it is a full moon. We have to find a way to get the village doctor to the temple. Oh great one please help us." So the sage replied "I possibly cannot get up from my spot but I will give you special powers so you can talk to the doctor and only the doctor. But tell him that I gave you the powers to talk to him." So then Muchu said "Oh thank you holy sage,thank you." Muchu flew to the doctor's clinic and explained the problem. So he and muchu hurried to the temple. But there was a problem. If you went into the temple before there was a full moon, you would be turned into stone. And Maliamma was in the temple. So Machu, Michu and Muchu prayed to god and asked that just today if the doctor could go into the temple to cure Maliamma. Then they came down to the steps where the doctor was waiting. Later they went up the stairs and the doctor got some medicine and in no time, Maliamma was better. She said to Machu, Michu and Muchu "Thank you so much for helping me. You will be my caretakers forever!" And they always helped Maliamma whenever she needed help.

Kwa Sin Yee

Muchu flew to the village to find the doctor. When he reached the house of the doctor, he got a big problem. He don't know how to tell that Maliamma was sick. He thought. After a while, he got an idea. He went outside of the doctor's house and take all the small stones. He used this stones to make a picture of sick Maliamma and the temple. The doctor was very clever, heunderstood what Muchu wanted to say. So, he quickly rushed to the temple with Muchu. Now,they reached the temple but the doctor couldn't enter the temple before the full moon day. He will become a stone. The doctor was brave. He wanted to save Maliamma, he ertered the temple and save Maliamma. Maliamma was health . She thanked the doctor very much. She gave some book about how to save people to the doctor. The doctor took it and went back.

sakshi

When the doctor arrived he checked Maliamma and then the doctor told the cat,mouse and crow that Maliamma is very sick and is going to die.Because she has worked very hard.

moulder

Muchu flew to the doctor's office. He was thinking of a way to save Maliamma. Then, Muchu sadly flew back to the temple. HE said to Maliamma,"I'm sorry,I wasn't able to talk to the doctor". Then,Maliamma got angry and turned him into a stone

karthik

Muchu flew to the doctor"s house. He was watching tv and muchu took the remote and flew to the temple. The doctor followed muchu to temple and he saved maliammma and they lived happily.

bebo

Then Pyarelal went to his friend rahul's house, apologised to him and told him to forgive his mistake. He asked for two bananas for his mother who was very ill. Then Rahul understood his friend's problem and forgave him and again they became good friends.

Sahil

When the farmer heard this he was disappointed at the donkey. so he thought to teach the Lazy donkey a valuable lesson. The bull acted so ill then the farmer took the donkey to a buyer and told him my hardworking bull is ill so I would sell him for some money to buy medicines for him. The donkey got scared that there he would get less food and not to sleep all the time. So he somehow convinced the bull to work. The next morning they were looking fresh and ready to work. Then the donkey got his lesson and then they were treated equally.

sunil

Then Pyarelal went to his friend Rahul's house, apologised to him and told him to forgive for his mistake. He asked for two bananas for his mother who was very ill. Rahul understood his friend's problem and forgave him and again they became good friends.

Palak

The crow reaches the village after some time. He goes to the hospital where the doctor was performing an operation. The crow took the medicine from the doctor's surgery plate. The medicine was very rare and it was brought from a foriegn country. The doctor had only one dose so he ran after the crow. The crow reached the temple and then maliamma told the doctor everything and the doctor treated maliamma and soon she was well. All of them thanked the crow as without his help the doctor would not have reached the temple.

Tanya

Mucchu went to the nearest village. He didnt knew what to do. But his friends are counting on him. " I wont let them down " he thought. He was flying around on of the huts and saw that the window was open. Inside there was an old lady who was sleeping. she looked pale and sick. there was a tablet near her bed. " She may be sick just like Maliamma " he thought. Just then he got a brilliant idea. " Why dont I take the tablet to Maliamma, I just have to hope its the right one." And so he grabbed the tablet with his beak before anyone could notice him and flew away. He reached the temple and gave the tablet to Maliamma. She was very happy to see him and thanked him alot. After one day she was all well. Thanks to the crow. The crow was a true friend indeed.

Rachael

As soon as muchu reached the village, he went straight to the doctor and started singing. The village doctor was very astonished with muchu's singing. He saw that muchu was flying away whilst singing and so he followed muchu's voice which led him to the hill. The village doctor saw Maliamma who looked very ill. He did some checkups on her and gave her medicine.

pari

Myna put the worm on the shore in a leaf and hid it so that no one could take it. Then ,she returned to the sea to help Mr.ant. Myna went into the sea and brought the ant out safely. The ant thanked myna and gave myna more worms to feed her child.

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