If I were a tree  By:  Heena Shah If I were a tree  My mom would never find me So I would always glee N’ also be free I would let the pure breeze blow through me If I were a tree Branches would grow on me Leaves would grow on me Flowers would grow on me N’ fruits would grow on me If I were a tree  Three things would be seen by me The sky, the birds, the cities around me Beautiful birds would sit on me Making their nests on me If I were a tree  Bees would sit on me Butterflies would fly around me Children would climb up me Oh! Only if I were a tree

Akansha 24-May-2004

The poem has a good rhyming scheme. Well done.

shraboni 29-Apr-2006

wonderful.

hami 29-Jun-2009

very nice

RIDHI 16-Sep-2010

nice poem

devasi 11-Oct-2010

Wow it is amazing.

arushi 11-Jan-2011

well done.

jasleen 1-May-2011

Wonderful !

kashika awesome 16-Jan-2012

Awesome

kavita 4-Feb-2012

It's so beautiful.

kavita 4-Feb-2012

It's so beautiful.

mannan 13-Feb-2012

Awesome.

tanu 28-Feb-2012

Wonderful

pushpanjali 22-May-2012

What a beautiful poem!

gelean 26-Jun-2012

A very beautiful poem