Dear Candle
You burn and burn but gently give me light.
Whether on hand or on land, you softly give me light.
You guide me when its dark, like my teacher in the class.
Whether it rains or it snows, you look like a beautiful lass.
You flicker sometimes but you try hard to stay,
Whether we pray or we play, you always give your ray.
You make light from dark skies above,
Like my mother's warmth and love.
Lets all learn from you how to be a dove.
By :
Malyatha
Shridharan ,
(8 years)
Block 912,
Apt # 06-115,
Tampines,
Street 91,
Singapore 520912
Srinidhi Iyengar
1-Apr-2002
Dear Malya, your poem is very nice. I like that poem. write often.
Vedha
2-Apr-2002
I liked your poem. You have got lots of skills with your words and expressions. Do write more!
Alwan
2-Apr-2002
Hi Maalya! that was nice. I hope this summer holiday, you will more to delight us .
Sri
2-Apr-2002
It is very nice to see 8 years old write such a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it and pl. keep writing more poems.
Akshat
2-Apr-2002
I liked your poem and please write more of such poems and stories
Nisha
4-Apr-2002
Hey!! Malya, your poem sounds good. You can improve your skills by writing more poems .
Lenora Mascarenhas
5-Apr-2002
Dear Maalya, I liked the poem very much and your rhyming words to make it sound more beautiful. Please keep writing many more beautiful poems like this.
Jerin
6-Apr-2002
Exellent, marvellous and fantastic
Divya Kamath
8-Apr-2002
Dear Maalya, Your poem is really good. There is a lot of Talent in You.
Shibali Malla
22-Apr-2002
Your song is very wonderful and nicely written. I like such poems.
Malyatha
14-Jan-2003
That was a really great!
Sally
14-Feb-2003
Oh Wow! What a wonderful poem it is!
Radha
19-Apr-2003
Hi your poem is fantastic. Keep writing more.
Sally
19-Apr-2003
Dear Malya, your poem is best! love Madhu.
Santhana
22-Apr-2003
Your poem is very nice
Madhumitha
2-May-2003
Dear Malyatha, Your poem is nice. Keep it up.
Madhu
5-May-2003
oh wow! your poem was great!
Geeta
4-Jun-2003
Good use of words and rhyming. Keep it up.
Jack Sean
23-May-2004
That was a very nice poem.. Keep it up! Keep writing more and you will develop your skills! Bye!!
manikandan
16-Jun-2004
Your poem is so good. I feel a touch in my heart.. all the best..
shraboni
29-Apr-2006
oh dear! You are 8yrs old. I can't believe it. You have a very good talent in yourself. keep it up.
june
5-Aug-2006
Nice poem, pls write more poems like this.
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