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If Today
Jill Patel
Std-6
Bharatiya Vidhya Bhavan's
V.M Public School
Baroda.
If Today
If you planted hope today,
if any hopeless heart.
If someone's burden was lighter,
because you did your part.
If you give all your happiness,
to people around you who are sad.
If you help anyone,
though it may affect your heart.
If tonight your name is named,
it will be engraved in others heart forever.
If today, so today.
If tomorrow, so tomorrow.
But remember,
things on time will help you forever.
Radhika
2-Nov-2006
Hello Jill, I read your poem and I liked it a lot. It really makes one want to do good for others. I don't write poems but my sister does. But I like to read poems. My sister's poem the one titled Zoo and its the 6th one on the right side of this page.
I'm also in Class 6 like you.
Keep writing.
Radhika
mahitha
6-Nov-2006
It's truly wonderful. What you have said in your poem is true. I like it.
vasundhara gaekwad
15-Nov-2006
Jill this poem is really lovely,good and I am impressed. Keep writing!
nayanika raj
3-Dec-2006
Jill I like your poem. It's really beautifully written.
hinali shah
29-Dec-2006
Jill your poem is wonderful. I liked it very much.
yashu
24-May-2008
plz send the poem to the high school level.
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