Hi Deepa, your poem is excellent and you have written everything including your feelings about your friend. When I was reading the poem I myself felt in my heart exactly what you have written. To me a friend is a beautiful flower in the garden of love
I think it is a very good poem because when I was in 2nd grade I lost a friend. I used to be depressed and cried all the time but now I am in 6th grade.. and I almost forgot about it.
Hai Deepa, it is really a wonderful poem. It filled me with thoughts about my best friend who went to a distant place. After reading this poem I felt that it is really about me.
Hi Deepa, your poem is very nice, too deep in words and art and touching too...for a moment I felt too sad inside loosing a very special friend but well that wont stop me from continuing dosti with others. Great work,!!
This poem reminds me of my friend, whom I lost, I have had sleepless nights after that, wondering why we were such good friends, and I know for sure no one, ever will be able to take that place in my heart, why did I get so close to the person, I always question to myself, end up with no answer. whatever I am is because of him, and I don't believe I am writing this to you. I haven't told this to anyone... I miss him so much.